The dialogue in the book was tricky. I think the "writing" (/sarcasm) sort of reflects the drawing. I think it was pretty deliberate, but basically I tried to keep the dialogue pretty sparse and only include what was absolutely necessary to know what was going on and what was happening.

I tried not to meander much, but the book does get more word heavy the further it goes.

I've noticed a few interesting things now that I'm sitting here staring at the real pages now. When it's finished, I might write about them (note to self: that means I need to take notes along the way).

Sort of, I don't know... ghost in the machine stuff. Unintended connections, coincidences and stuff. Allegories maybe.